I originally uploaded a version of this page with slightly less dialogue. I had previously thought about adding the extra lines, but decided not to … however, on seeing some of the comments on posting, I realised the page was significantly more open to interpretation than I intended! So, I have added in the extra lines and re-uploaded. Apologies to everyone who read the previous version, but seeing as this is a pretty important page in the story, I really wanted to do the best I could with it. |